I had mixed feelings with my experience, i love the concept.

but I hope my feedback will be helpful in anyway needed :)

for starters: I believe the mouse sensitivity should be increased. it feels a bit slow

secondly: exiting the map, or anything in that open tab feels very slow

thirdly: at the beginning of the time travel, they mention listening to the people's noises. but the gameplay up till you enter the gates is quite quiet. i think adding, albeit muffled and maybe just subtle background noise. but adding some muffled lively chatter would help incorporate and immerse us to the storyline that prompted him going to the gate

fourth: i like the graphics so far, i know for sure they're not finished. but I'm eager to see how they'll be enhanced, i really like the idea of feeling nearly we're looking through max's eyes at the real deal. like watching through someone's lenses [especially when we are at the beginning, where they're hiding from the DEForce] really peer through max's eyes with a realism aspect

fifth: when we're in first person in the apartment, when we move or mostly run, it could feel a bit more fluid if we spot like the occasional hand or foot, maybe the jostle of the screen to indicate the more fluid movements

sixth: I've got to add this lol

petting feature - nice little 5-10 second cutscene with the change of angle as we pet the animal, dog, horse, the lamb's ;3

seventh: the horse animation and riding animation feels very stiff to me if I'm being honest, but I'm so glad we can have horse's lol [shame they won't respawn]

I've got a few bugs, but I'll add those to the other tab,

I will say at the end of my experience. I never finished the mission for solving her riddle. and I'm not sure if anyone else will either.

reason why, I've done each of the stands, and I've gotten every scroll [yes even the one in the center of the romans] but the only scrolls of fact's i cannot touch. are the 4? or 5 outside the blue barrier.....But I've done every other activity. and cannot attain the last word, thus I cannot solve the riddle.

which is a little disappointing because I feel like a demo perhaps should finish at least the first mission, but I know it's in major work in progress, an likely that's all that's going to be available. so, it's fine

overall, my experience wasn't too bad

I would like some more audible experience, just because from experience. physically reading can take a while or become a turnoff to some people whether at the start or gradually as they're running around for so long